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The Sunset Hours

Postby korky123 » Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:12 pm

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Wordives…

are hidden things (beneath layers of rolling script)
they disappear like notes on a player piano.
we watch as letters ride the wave into the surf,
and re-emerge on the far side of a flattening earth…

© 2011 rainwriter jones
I have an uncanny flair for the mediocre, coupled with an occasional burst of insignificance. ~rainwriter jones
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Re: The Sunset Hours

Postby demona dragon » Tue Jun 07, 2011 8:36 pm

Great picture and wonderful prose as always :D
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"Dreams of falling - dreams of flying.
a man who never dreams goes slowly mad."
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Re: The Sunset Hours

Postby korky123 » Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:30 am

Thank you, DD. I'm glad you enjoy them. The poem revolves around the stillness here on the forum, and the posts which flow down the page out of sight. Interesting concept...
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